Hey @rjmays!
Thanks for sharing 'it gets better' with us!
We like the lyrics, they're put together real well.
Your voice sounds a bit fuzzy, could you try recordin' closer to the mic? Unfortunately the recordin' hasn't come out too well, perhaps you could try recordin' in a quieter place.
We liked the idea behind the track, keep workin' on your narrative rapping! Nice flow here - delivery is so important. You can hear good energy in your delivery, which is great.
Submit more music for instant feedback from us, we'd love to hear more!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Hey @rjmays! Thanks for sharing 'it gets better' with us! We like the lyrics, they're put together real well. Your voice sounds a bit fuzzy, could you try recordin' closer to the mic? Unfortunately the recordin' hasn't come out too well, perhaps you could try recordin' in a quieter place. We liked the idea behind the track, keep workin' on your narrative rapping! Nice flow here - delivery is so important. You can hear good energy in your delivery, which is great. Submit more music for instant feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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