Hi patchezx11! Welcome to our feedback of 'What's your story'! Your vocals are the perfect level over the beat, keep mixing like that! Your rhyming is dope, it sounds real nice! Work on developing original bars to help your tracks shine through! Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics! Nice meaning behind the track, it's dope! The recordin' is of a good quality, we can hear each individual element. This track has good energy in it that helps the lyrics come through. Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

B-Low

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 7/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: On point 🎯 Impression: Great 🎉

TMBeatZ

5 years ago

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Piotr Sandiego

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 6/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Nice 🌟 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Dope 🔥

lil cil

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Perfect 💯