Hey @leviraburn!
Thanks for sharing 'life' with us!
Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. Great energy, such chill vibes.
Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, you may wanna put it up a little. Your vocals are a little unclear, maybe try recording closer to the mic? Try workin' on the bars to get a fresh lyrical sound. Practice coming up with original rhymes to create a fresh sound. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics.
Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
#cottonblood Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
@rapfame_ar_team sorry I don't wont my dad to here me but I will try
Hey @leviraburn! Thanks for sharing 'life' with us! Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. Great energy, such chill vibes. Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, you may wanna put it up a little. Your vocals are a little unclear, maybe try recording closer to the mic? Try workin' on the bars to get a fresh lyrical sound. Practice coming up with original rhymes to create a fresh sound. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
My slime! This hit's fire, straight up dope! 🤝 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥