Hi @da_kid_lei173!
Welcome to our feedback of 'Bank'!
Dope delivery, the track flows real nice.
The vocals are a little unclear, you may wanna try recording closer to the mic to get a better sound.
Good choice of beat! Your timing is great, nicely done. Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire.
Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great ๐ Delivery: Great ๐ Impression: Great ๐
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Hi @da_kid_lei173! Welcome to our feedback of 'Bank'! Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. The vocals are a little unclear, you may wanna try recording closer to the mic to get a better sound. Good choice of beat! Your timing is great, nicely done. Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Here are my scores: Bars: 6/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Nice ๐ Delivery: Great ๐ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great ๐ Delivery: Great ๐ Impression: Great ๐
This woke me up! But let's sharpen the message of your track! โ๏ธ Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Great ๐
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ