MOONLIGHT (18:00)

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Pushing by with my weight Boopity boop in your face Every time you call me I’m never late So please don’t play with me now If you play around I take I lay out the lines on the biggest plate Smoked out the room I gotta go Smashed your bitch in the bathroom You had to know She screaming and dealing with the stick She don’t want you now so I splatted in her face Ah ha then you kisses the bitch Man I got to go I got another play to make Man in the mirror I’m a monster For heaven sake’s That pussy was so good She nutted up and down my wood You always wish you could I wish you would doe I got a big bag I don’t know how much I got It keeps getting fat every bigboi knots Cause I got a baggggg Can’t count how much I have So I make it rain big boi cash Cause I Cause I gotta baaaaag Daytime nighttime Fucking serving all the time Get a check got a check I stay right all the time Whatcha need I got what you need Ima serve ya up don’t say a word pretty please Chasing money with these feins Poin up wit da Lein How much I’m saying what you mean Never jammed up Jellin what you think Can’t never shut my eyes I never miss a beat I don’t even blink

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Lil Joiner2.0

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Jmoney

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Rap Fame A&R

5 years ago

Hey @kylebutler! Thanks for sharing 'MOONLIGHT (18:00)' with us! Good choice of beat! Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix. Try workin' on the bars to get a fresh lyrical sound. Sweet timing, you're ridin the beat real nice. Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

ZWoke Uriah

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

LUCKY LeGEND7

5 years ago

🤯⭐⭐⭐⭐ Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Kyle Butler

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5 years ago

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The 1 one

2 months ago