mothers love
have u ever had mother that tried her best most of us wont confess the love and gratitude that was given for some sudden reason now its just driften now days us kids dont listen this pandemic got us all sicken momma I'm sorry for all the shit that I put through was to young to know I was acting a fool rezlife no money can make native break the rules making u worry was never kool I was always ditching school just to hang with big boys drugs and alcohol had its joy never really had alot toys you always work hard hardly even had time play even though i was the problem u still prayed you had a chance to leave me but for some reason you still stayed there where times u almost gave up of on me suffered so much brain is thinking fuck humanity some of our are close siblings lost there sanity most lost there familys death is just another tragedy I just want best so we can all live happily a native life is never to perfect the pursuit of happiness u need to search it laziness is not an option body needs to work it what is your purpose live good dont look back made the man above take away all your curses u see my birth mom was never really their grandma became my real mom she was the one that cared but im not gonna judge and start to blame u mom I know life was never fair my father sitting in the same chair so there's really no reason to compare you both left me stranded and alone with no hug or kiss 30 years old look all the moments that you missed So thankful for u both making me the man I am today Got a beautiful wife with two gorgeous daughters who I love so u see ever things ok
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have u ever had mother that tried her best most of us wont confess the love and gratitude that was given for some sudden reason now its just driften now days us kids dont listen this pandemic got us all sicken momma I'm sorry for all the shit that I put through was to young to know I was acting a fool rezlife no money can make native break the rules making u worry was never kool I was always ditching school just to hang with big boys drugs and alcohol had its joy never really had alot toys you always work hard hardly even had time play even though i was the problem u still prayed you had a chance to leave me but for some reason you still stayed there where times u almost gave up of on me suffered so much brain is thinking fuck humanity some of our are close siblings lost there sanity most lost there familys death is just another tragedy I just want best so we can all live happily a native life is never to perfect the pursuit of happiness u need to search it laziness is not an option body needs to work it what is your purpose live good dont look back made the man above take away all your curses u see my birth mom was never really their grandma became my real mom she was the one that cared but im not gonna judge and start to blame u mom I know life was never fair my father sitting in the same chair so there's really no reason to compare you both left me stranded and alone with no hug or kiss 30 years old look all the moments that you missed So thankful for u both making me the man I am today Got a beautiful wife with two gorgeous daughters who I love so u see ever things ok
Yo @batesj, It's time for us to take a look at 'mothers love '! ๐ฅ Your rhyming is tighttt. โจ Awesome track, theres a couple moments where you could cut a few lyrics here and to improve the flow! Also listening to to your favourite artists and paying attention to the flow patterns especially at the end of each sections in the song can really help you out! The recording is clean clear & under control, this really helps add to your track. โ Nice use of vocal effects! Helps the hook pop! The emotion is real in this one, we can hear your passion.๐ Definitely a heartfelt moment here, we can hear how much your Mom means to you! We hope you send us some more tracks in the future, we would love to see how you take our feedback on board! ๐ช All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
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@batesj awe brother I did one for my mum too. it's on bandlab we could do a collaboration on it