DaCoz Freestyle 2

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Picking apart, knowing my role don't diminish seein the south on a roll I'll be the first of attendance that's just the beginning We holding the keys Niggas thought we was tenants This shit is like tennis You feel it we give it and thats the love and we get it Sell you in the bounce with a rhythm My volume, my system, my bars in my writtens no contradictin Its written between the dotted I see the disclaimer Took a long walk n im sprintin My calling you get it? Like chellos im spittin, you know i be winded.. No tellin who in it You feel it.. That's the dotted, my nigga Dont forget to sign in intials Came with the spirit No lifting Spearheaded a midget To show the range come with this game Niggas doing the most, When you don't fan up their flame Get it? when they don't sell with no gimmick Thats the piggy back of the industry Oink and you finish.. Now here is the pincher, nigga what is you pitching? ain't in the picture must be swinging for fences..uh Thats just the basis of dealin.. Slid in the game, dug her out just to fill it.. It aint home if you know who the villain.. you tryna strike wit no consistence, you'll get striked for MY pigment, no matter how much intentions, tired of being pretentious, they putting percentages its half off integrity selling no image And thats the half off When you get it In the wrong slot, im authentic, Often im off for a minute, Y'all niggas bickering, shit that make no difference No matter how much i sentence it I ain't breaking down shit but this swisha im bout to hit..

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2300 Brazzy

4 years ago

Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Dope 🔥

Landry Zang

4 years ago

pas mal Bars: Can improve 👏 Delivery: Can improve 👏 Impression: Can improve 👏

Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

Wassup @elijahcesar, Thank you for sharing 'Freestyle #1' with our community 💥. Here is a little feedback from us: We like the bars, well written! You've thought about what you're trying to say in this track and it shows, nicely done. 👍 This track has a nice rhythm to it. Great flows! You're riding this beat with perfect timing, love it! 🌠 We like how the beat sounds with your voice. 🎼 You have such a way in telling stories through your lyrics. This keeps us so engaged with the track and makes for a great listen! You have real natural flow as well which just adds to this track! Just bring that vocal volume down a bit and you'll see an improvement in the mix quality. Talent + hard work = great rap! And you got it!! Seriously impressed with this, now get back in the studio and keep makin' tracks! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

J.Plantana

4 years ago

this is fire🔥check out my contest track #FFJPlant Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Perfect 💯

Bigg Relapz

4 years ago

join my crew underground Spittaz Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Jay Motixn

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

💎💯✨KING SCICO 👑👑

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥