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5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

bjaydee333

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Ziplok

5 years ago

🔥🔥🏆🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Rap Fame A&R

5 years ago

Hi @lil_budy_bud_on_top! Welcome to our feedback of 'nightmare'! Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. You've used a cool balance of clean and explicit language. Try workin' on the bars to get a fresh lyrical sound. Practice coming up with original rhymes to create a fresh sound. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. Nicely done, you can feel the positivity coming from this track! Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Bodie Jackson

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 7/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: On point 🎯 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉

Lil buddy bud

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5 years ago

@DESTROYER79 thx

👌🩸GUNNHOE👌🩸💨📳🥊

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Lil buddy bud

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