@ohmygodkai so of course it isn’t going to match up or sync correctly or I maybe off beat but it’s cool. I listened to it again and wrote down the lyrics I had and plan on redoing it to make it better than what I put out. Isn’t that all what’s it’s about accepting that you fucked up but willing to improve on it. I respect your opinion in fact I agreed 100% I’m glad someone else was thinking the same way.
@ohmygodkai yea that’s all cool. It really is and I couldn’t agree with you more. I free styled the first part and started to ramble on so I chopped the rambling. I tried to free style the second part but no mas. That’s why when you hear the different tones in my voice is because I kept staring over and over and over until I felt like it was good. I’m still not satisfied yet but I thought I should at least put something out.
your structure is a little fucked. it's a good song but I feel some parts were misplaced. the quality is a little fried. your mixing abilities need sharpened because u and the beat aren't meshing. there's no layering and quite frank I was bored. it's a dope song just had so much more potential. all love
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@ohmygodkai all and all my guy it’s only a rough draft so don’t be afraid to say all you need to say, without putting “all love”.
@ohmygodkai so of course it isn’t going to match up or sync correctly or I maybe off beat but it’s cool. I listened to it again and wrote down the lyrics I had and plan on redoing it to make it better than what I put out. Isn’t that all what’s it’s about accepting that you fucked up but willing to improve on it. I respect your opinion in fact I agreed 100% I’m glad someone else was thinking the same way.
@ohmygodkai yea that’s all cool. It really is and I couldn’t agree with you more. I free styled the first part and started to ramble on so I chopped the rambling. I tried to free style the second part but no mas. That’s why when you hear the different tones in my voice is because I kept staring over and over and over until I felt like it was good. I’m still not satisfied yet but I thought I should at least put something out.
your structure is a little fucked. it's a good song but I feel some parts were misplaced. the quality is a little fried. your mixing abilities need sharpened because u and the beat aren't meshing. there's no layering and quite frank I was bored. it's a dope song just had so much more potential. all love
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