Yo @johnathanseverance!
Waddup - let's take a look at ' - lean wit me by juice world, acoustic cover by Paint'!
The vocals sound great, nicely done!
The rhyming is well put together. Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. Good choice of beat! Dope recording, nicely done. Just a few little things and this track will be there, you got it!
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All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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need a little bit drop to it Bars: Can improve π Delivery: Can improve π Impression: Can improve π
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Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Great π Impression: Dope π₯
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―
Yo @johnathanseverance! Waddup - let's take a look at ' - lean wit me by juice world, acoustic cover by Paint'! The vocals sound great, nicely done! The rhyming is well put together. Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. Good choice of beat! Dope recording, nicely done. Just a few little things and this track will be there, you got it! Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Great π Delivery: Great π Impression: Dope π₯
pretty good but probably be better without the echo
@johnathanseverance π―π₯β respect π anytime keep grinding πͺ
@lyricalspitter thank sbro
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Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Great π Delivery: Great π Impression: Great π
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯