crushed

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as farback as i can remember things were never so easy oh the simplicity how it all changed like i never really knew anyone at all darkness pain endless guilt and missory but something happened and now that i think about it it makes me smile like a faded memory now its back to the cemetery to pay my respect for all that i am ill never foget thanks for the time we had no regrets the moment come as quick as you left may you finally get to rest ill be there with you one day and i look forward to seeing you again these are the things that I believe can bring an end to the suffering madness and allow peace love happiness just knowing that this isn't the end i know we will see each other once again

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Joe Hollowell

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6 years ago

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Rap Fame A&R

5 years ago

Yo @joehollowell.7698! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'crushed'! 💥 Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! 🎧 Your voice flows nicely over the track. Well delivered!! 🎶 You and this beat is like yin and yang! Amazing choice! Any chance you could improve the recording quality, it takes a lot away from your track. Really feeling the emotion on this track, hits real hard. 💜 Just a few tweaks and this track is almost there, keep grinding! 🤟 We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Gilbert Lucero

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Mr.OG Loco. #FreeDaStreetz

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

{GB} Dubble A

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Dope 🔥

Rick E Turner

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 7/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: On point 🎯