Yo @ray5!
Waddup. Let's take a look at 'Till it unfolds featuring Katie Burke '! 💥
We like the lyrics, they're put together real well. 🙌
You defo have the ability to hit this beat hard, just try and maintain this throughout the whole track! 🙏
Good choice of beat here! 🎼
The recording is a little fuzzy, try improving the sound quality if you can.
We think that it's great you found your own sound and you have such a unique vibe about you! We know you can flow well on this beat, you just need to ensure this is consistent throughout the whole track. You're nearly there just keep on practising on your sound and we know you can make it!
We see the potential here, with a few adjustments we can see the room for progression! 🤟
We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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Yo @ray5! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'Till it unfolds featuring Katie Burke '! 💥 We like the lyrics, they're put together real well. 🙌 You defo have the ability to hit this beat hard, just try and maintain this throughout the whole track! 🙏 Good choice of beat here! 🎼 The recording is a little fuzzy, try improving the sound quality if you can. We think that it's great you found your own sound and you have such a unique vibe about you! We know you can flow well on this beat, you just need to ensure this is consistent throughout the whole track. You're nearly there just keep on practising on your sound and we know you can make it! We see the potential here, with a few adjustments we can see the room for progression! 🤟 We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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