ну так попадания в бит есть но-рифма -флоу-текст
то есть подумай над подачай не надо так повать хотябы какие-то имоции должны быть в тексте
я понимаю то что микрофон от тел не улавливает тембар ноооо
тут сразу видно даже не старался) 

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