Hi @donbeefy200!
Welcome to our feedback of 'l'!
Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track.
Try workin' on rhymes to get a unique sound. Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars.
The beat is fire, nice choice. Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there.
Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
you really sick for this lol
Hi @donbeefy200! Welcome to our feedback of 'l'! Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. Try workin' on rhymes to get a unique sound. Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. The beat is fire, nice choice. Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 7/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: On point 🎯
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 7/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: On point 🎯 Impression: Great 🎉
I like
Wild 🤪
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
WET 🏀
BOMB! 🧨
Dig it 👏
TOUGH 😮💨
WET 🏀
SICK 👻
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
good
@donbeefy200
sick