The Orange R i b b o n
Thats it! The pain inside has finally amplified. The Trust and 💘 i thought i had waa justified. Tried for years to get you to see me, instead, all ya did was ignore me mister unsigned tee. Fuck you abd your Dan Brown too. Did ya honestly think, i wanted your egotistical cock up inside me? Think again. Wish my birth was a complete Blessing, not a sin. Yet i continue on with that beautiful nightmare of what went wrong. Tell me something luv. When ya wake up in the morning. Do i ever cross your mind.Mcknight. Do ya ever think about reaching out for me feelin that type a way, not giving a care what others say? Lemme elaborate for ya hunny. The more my sons laundry nat trips to changing an ABA s job daily. See, at first i thought ya was hot like Carson Daley. Then the more i heard bout ya, the more i depised the minions. Oh that BOB! Aint that suttin? I know im far too grown yo he tryin out something new, yet if i dont stay busy with that word hope come creativity, im fraid wont make it to a new day from creation of clay and yesterday was monday. In that year we felt an intense surge of tsunami of fear. Meantime, after 10, im callin ya out, left hand wit some sunny D, lil B 12, and some Ginseng, right hand sayin step son, yes YOU, reagonomics baby.
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Thats it! The pain inside has finally amplified. The Trust and 💘 i thought i had waa justified. Tried for years to get you to see me, instead, all ya did was ignore me mister unsigned tee. Fuck you abd your Dan Brown too. Did ya honestly think, i wanted your egotistical cock up inside me? Think again. Wish my birth was a complete Blessing, not a sin. Yet i continue on with that beautiful nightmare of what went wrong. Tell me something luv. When ya wake up in the morning. Do i ever cross your mind.Mcknight. Do ya ever think about reaching out for me feelin that type a way, not giving a care what others say? Lemme elaborate for ya hunny. The more my sons laundry nat trips to changing an ABA s job daily. See, at first i thought ya was hot like Carson Daley. Then the more i heard bout ya, the more i depised the minions. Oh that BOB! Aint that suttin? I know im far too grown yo he tryin out something new, yet if i dont stay busy with that word hope come creativity, im fraid wont make it to a new day from creation of clay and yesterday was monday. In that year we felt an intense surge of tsunami of fear. Meantime, after 10, im callin ya out, left hand wit some sunny D, lil B 12, and some Ginseng, right hand sayin step son, yes YOU, reagonomics baby.
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Hi @stephaniepayne! Welcome to our feedback of 'The Orange R i b b o n'! Your vocals are a great volume in the mix, but they're a little unclear, you may play around with your distance from the mic! Your bars are dope, we like how you put 'em all together. Awesome delivery, so many tight flows!! We think this track is awesome and could be a hit!! Submit more music for instant feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Dope 🔥
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this beat is lit. your flow is on point
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Blessings!
awesome girly
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