Scratchers

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I got an addiction to scratchers because I kept winning one day and putting my winnings into the play. $500 here, $100 there and win all, big bag but it wasn’t enough. It dwindled down and I had nothing left. So the slot machine 🎰was my very next bet. I hated myself because I thought I was always a winner. But the truth was I was looking for the fast route of the sinner. I got the scratcher dirt all over my hands like I’m trying to kill it but it’s an illusion man. When I had enough money or a little more than I had, I put it all to the game but the game knows I’m mad. The energy spikes and eats up my cash 💵 I should’ve known this would happen I feel like Such a dumb ass But I tell myself At least I don’t smoke two packs a day Or drink till I’m blind and fade away But this doesn’t help because I know what I did, I wasted away my money on something Stupid like gumball machine for a little kid. Maybe that’s why vending toy machine in store Is right next to lottery buttons

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Devin Baker

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6 years ago

Istrive Wooski813

4 years ago

🔥🔥🔥 OK I’m rocking with this Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

MarkO

4 years ago

This auto tune is too much my guy good story telling try it without the auto tune it distorts the audio too much and the story goes with the beat Bars: Good 💛 Delivery: Good 💛 Impression: Nice 🌟

🤴🏿89

4 years ago

It’s different I would of chosen a different beat because it sounds like those lyrics would be better for a R&B beat without 808 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Flockared3

4 years ago

🔥🔥🔥💪🏾 keep it up Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

Hey @purpleduck, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'Scratchers'! 💥 The vocals aren't coming out clear, test different mic positions and try to keep the distance between you and the mic consistent. Work on improving how you deliver your bars and different flows to your tracks. You're not on beat with this one, try practising your timing so you can improve on your tracks. Can you improve the quality of your recording somehow? It will really improve the sound of your tracks. The effects don't really compliment this track, try to find the right ones for the mood. We'd suggest you give our Masterclass feature a try to help build up your confidence and timing! The production on this has really let this track down. Your vocals are unclear and this may due to your choice of FX. On your nest submission try and clean this up so we can give you some more constructive feedback! Thanks for the track, we enjoyed listening! Keep 'em comin' All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

RUSTA

4 years ago

pls check me out Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉

🎶)3!u3《💀》$κ33🎶

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

❀Ɓ𐤠ƊƁΘƳ ❝𝗡𝗼𝘃𝗮❞❀

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉

Steven Chibesa

6 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10