Take me back
on my bed trynna get some sleep a knock on the door blanket flip sought out to check who it is it was depression and it's me it seeks spent some till he was done with me took a while to get some sleep this ain't the type of life I'd like to lead just take me back to when I was a kid when all my thoughts was what I could eat *2 I played fell injured and bleed had the time to massacre the meat skipped C it was ABD back then had some lil G' s innocence covered up for all our deeds tho we did some crazy shit other Lil's were trynna join the clique we were so on flick the major was stupid now my dreams are lucid tho yours might be exclusive chasing after the Cupid's as lethal as acid immaginary was so massive rude was submissive best day was Christmas Eve I miss you Eve tho I didn't get to talk to her my bestie Steve hardcore that's how we ride we gat one up our sleeves hey Rollie my Simon you can't understand I got so at ease I thought we gon' roll for the rest of our lives if you living like me it's only Rollie you'd roll with the rest of your lives avoiding the bitch with a watery tear diamond rolling out your eyes if I had the balls I'd go to drugs to be the only Ally there ain't no more Steve he still alive? I won't know even if he died on my bed trynna get some sleep a knock on the door blanket flip sought out to check who it is it was depression and it's me it seeks spent some till he was done with me took a while to get some sleep
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on my bed trynna get some sleep a knock on the door blanket flip sought out to check who it is it was depression and it's me it seeks spent some till he was done with me took a while to get some sleep this ain't the type of life I'd like to lead just take me back to when I was a kid when all my thoughts was what I could eat *2 I played fell injured and bleed had the time to massacre the meat skipped C it was ABD back then had some lil G' s innocence covered up for all our deeds tho we did some crazy shit other Lil's were trynna join the clique we were so on flick the major was stupid now my dreams are lucid tho yours might be exclusive chasing after the Cupid's as lethal as acid immaginary was so massive rude was submissive best day was Christmas Eve I miss you Eve tho I didn't get to talk to her my bestie Steve hardcore that's how we ride we gat one up our sleeves hey Rollie my Simon you can't understand I got so at ease I thought we gon' roll for the rest of our lives if you living like me it's only Rollie you'd roll with the rest of your lives avoiding the bitch with a watery tear diamond rolling out your eyes if I had the balls I'd go to drugs to be the only Ally there ain't no more Steve he still alive? I won't know even if he died on my bed trynna get some sleep a knock on the door blanket flip sought out to check who it is it was depression and it's me it seeks spent some till he was done with me took a while to get some sleep
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Hey @aborisade! Thanks for sharing 'Take me back' with us! Dope beat, really works for this track! Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix. Try workin' on rhymes to get a unique sound. Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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