Wassup @ShawnawayMalone,
Thank you for sharing 'training thangs' with our community π₯. Here is a little feedback from us:
The rhyming is well put together. β¨
Smooth delivery here, keep it up! πΆ Your timing is perfect, you're landing perfectly on the beat. π
The beat selection is on point, good job. π§¨
Try improving your recording quality if you can.
The beat sounds amazing, loving that oliver twist sample and it adds a ton of personality and energy to the track. Your delivery is mostly solid and we love how you're switching up your cadence, but there's a lot of interference and muffling with the vocals, probably caused by by an overuse of vocal FX. Just a few tweaks and this track is there.
Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. π€
We can't wait to hear your next fire track! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Wassup @ShawnawayMalone, Thank you for sharing 'training thangs' with our community π₯. Here is a little feedback from us: The rhyming is well put together. β¨ Smooth delivery here, keep it up! πΆ Your timing is perfect, you're landing perfectly on the beat. π The beat selection is on point, good job. 𧨠Try improving your recording quality if you can. The beat sounds amazing, loving that oliver twist sample and it adds a ton of personality and energy to the track. Your delivery is mostly solid and we love how you're switching up your cadence, but there's a lot of interference and muffling with the vocals, probably caused by by an overuse of vocal FX. Just a few tweaks and this track is there. Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. π€ We can't wait to hear your next fire track! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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