Underwater (18:27)
See I miss my son and I ain’t never even met him so it’s safe to say that I’ve been bonded with him since conception misconceptions with contraceptives thinking she will not get pregnant goose bumps on my flesh every single time I spit this sentence ever since my prison sentence only thing that’s making sense is that raise my lil homie show him how to be a man no second guessing he won’t raise his hands against women he ain’t catching no domestics genuinely a gentleman generally he inharets complex characteristics thru the shared genetics of of his parents and apparently it is apparent That to become a better parent being there being in his presence not written letters sending presents father ready with life’s lessons if I can not answer I will use a bible as a reference who could question say it’s wrong if gods the one fucking who said it greatest empires ever built upon planet built upon this simple premise to be simply put its picture perfect words of wisdom mankind still cant seem to ruin reminiscent of the times That I would sit in church n never listen never thinking one day my son would might need this teaching teaching me a lesson even though I’m standing present if i do not pay attention I am failing him an even worse he gets to witness failing him failing again going back to prison throwing him away now he’s losing twice the loss’s so significant I pray to god that he will never have to witness me inside the deepest darkest part of my addiction silver lining blessing is I love my children and even though his mother is my victim she won’t stand between us truly wants his with father with him that’s a blessing thanks Athena Draven ray I love you and just know I’m hella happy to meet ya against My addiction against all odds my sons my mission he’s in my sights sitting in a parking lot it’s one am this is a prime example for you to just sample how my life is not so simple ample opportunity for people to snap at you judgment dripping tone of voice that they be using pointing fingers dripping venom looking at you with a snap back face full of these tattoos entire yea I said it Draven you my only son and I’ve loved you every single second even in a single cell stuck inside the deepest part of hell
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See I miss my son and I ain’t never even met him so it’s safe to say that I’ve been bonded with him since conception misconceptions with contraceptives thinking she will not get pregnant goose bumps on my flesh every single time I spit this sentence ever since my prison sentence only thing that’s making sense is that raise my lil homie show him how to be a man no second guessing he won’t raise his hands against women he ain’t catching no domestics genuinely a gentleman generally he inharets complex characteristics thru the shared genetics of of his parents and apparently it is apparent That to become a better parent being there being in his presence not written letters sending presents father ready with life’s lessons if I can not answer I will use a bible as a reference who could question say it’s wrong if gods the one fucking who said it greatest empires ever built upon planet built upon this simple premise to be simply put its picture perfect words of wisdom mankind still cant seem to ruin reminiscent of the times That I would sit in church n never listen never thinking one day my son would might need this teaching teaching me a lesson even though I’m standing present if i do not pay attention I am failing him an even worse he gets to witness failing him failing again going back to prison throwing him away now he’s losing twice the loss’s so significant I pray to god that he will never have to witness me inside the deepest darkest part of my addiction silver lining blessing is I love my children and even though his mother is my victim she won’t stand between us truly wants his with father with him that’s a blessing thanks Athena Draven ray I love you and just know I’m hella happy to meet ya against My addiction against all odds my sons my mission he’s in my sights sitting in a parking lot it’s one am this is a prime example for you to just sample how my life is not so simple ample opportunity for people to snap at you judgment dripping tone of voice that they be using pointing fingers dripping venom looking at you with a snap back face full of these tattoos entire yea I said it Draven you my only son and I’ve loved you every single second even in a single cell stuck inside the deepest part of hell
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Ty again to all who like and comment your all much appreciated
Thank you 🙏 very much @barracuda it’s only like the 6 thing I’ve written with care it’s definitely a work in progress that was just the first time I hit it all
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