Tissue 4 ma Issues
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Life carry us on and on So we must be focused and stop interfering someone issues...Jabzy wan Black says
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Yo @YoungEphathJabzy! Waddup - let's take a look at 'Tissue 4 ma Issues'! The beat is dope and really works for this track. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. Dope recording, nicely done. The effects are done well, keep doin' what you're doin'. Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
I love the accent and the energy you sound kind of like me but I don't understand what you're saying fully so it's going to be hard for other people to understand your message work on clarity and turn up your lead vocals everything else is pretty much what I would do keep working on it you can only get better check my music out and hit me up for collaboration Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Great π Impression: Dope π₯
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Life carry us on and on So we must be focused and stop interfering someone issues...Jabzy wan Black says
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