broken heart hours

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broken heart hours

babygirl please talk to me, thinking about setting myself free from the fucking hate that you give me it's time that I leave, I can't fucking stay, but those memories will always be inside my brain I can't show no pain, I can't show no weakness, yea I have to keep some secrets can't help that you didn't show me love I found some love that ain't tough it actually feels good to have someone to love me, I think I'm finally free

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6 years ago

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6 years ago

@BigDickEnergyDrink no problem

wordd... I Bet now that you're more aware of what you could improve on you'll see a definitive difference in quality then...jus do what u feel sounds best n kill dat shit mang.👌🏻

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6 years ago

@BigDickEnergyDrink I'm working on a remix rn, hopefully it's better, needa hit that timing right

@cjbeast21 u can always redo it. leave it up n go back at it...once u have a version dat slap take this down n put it up... u good mang👌🏻

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6 years ago

@BigDickEnergyDrink thank you!

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hit tha mic like u mean it...deliver dem bars wit more energy Bruh... ur gonna improve like a muhhfucka cuh u already got sum skills u can build on. 💯💯

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6 years ago

@BigDickEnergyDrink that's what I was thinking listening back on it, I was sitting here like, that's some off beat shit

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Not bad if it's ur first track... lyrically u was aiight but u gotta harmonize wit tha Beat... I think u could also work on ur delivery timing so ur lyrics flow wit tha beat.

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6 years ago

@jackturnah thank you, first track

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im actually pleasantly surprised yo....nice job homie

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4sho G

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