Yo @Ox..,
It's time for us to take a look at 'Turn They Back'! π₯
Strong bars on this, keep it up! π Your rhyming is tight. β¨ The track has meaning. π
Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. πΆ
Good choice of beat! πΌ
Dope track mane! The delivery could be a bit more exciting but that's also subjective. Would say add some ad libs to add some character to the track if possible.
It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Yo @Ox.., It's time for us to take a look at 'Turn They Back'! π₯ Strong bars on this, keep it up! π Your rhyming is tight. β¨ The track has meaning. π Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. πΆ Good choice of beat! πΌ Dope track mane! The delivery could be a bit more exciting but that's also subjective. Would say add some ad libs to add some character to the track if possible. It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
Please check out #deathtojsaint and let me know what you think about it Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
This Mf Hard. No Kap. π₯πͺπ½π₯πͺπ½βΌοΈ #TeeDogg205 Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―
good track yo. keep me coming
π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯ keep dropping that real life struggle music βοΈπ
@eagleexotic how about I rumble with uπ€π€π€
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10
@Ox.. @V_LAZ @kzone247 @realab battle up
@IIVRaptor appreciate it folk π―
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@IDOntSpitBarz Thanks youπͺ just gotta keep grindin
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Here are my scores: Bars: 7/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 9/10
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10
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Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 7/10
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10