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This ones nice, that flow needs some work bro. Not bad just some work. Slow down some, seems like you trynna day too much@
Respect for that bro, always good to get feedback 👊
good bars, structure, msg, flow is a little choppy but it's solid at points. It seems more like a syllable problem, try matching syllables on every to bars. Good stuff fam
WOW ⚡
Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Dope 🔥
CAKE 🍰 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
BLESSED 🙏 Love ❤️🔥 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Straightenin’ 👌 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
FIRE 🔥 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
ok🔥🔥🔥🔥 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
not bad
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This ones nice, that flow needs some work bro. Not bad just some work. Slow down some, seems like you trynna day too much@
Respect for that bro, always good to get feedback 👊
good bars, structure, msg, flow is a little choppy but it's solid at points. It seems more like a syllable problem, try matching syllables on every to bars. Good stuff fam
WOW ⚡
Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Dope 🔥
CAKE 🍰 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
BLESSED 🙏 Love ❤️🔥 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Straightenin’ 👌 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
FIRE 🔥 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
ok🔥🔥🔥🔥 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
not bad