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25 Feb 2020

Real talk 🎙️ #writtens #newup #lyrical #bars #eirereborn

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This ones nice, that flow needs some work bro. Not bad just some work. Slow down some, seems like you trynna day too much@

4 years ago

Respect for that bro, always good to get feedback 👊

4 years ago

good bars, structure, msg, flow is a little choppy but it's solid at points. It seems more like a syllable problem, try matching syllables on every to bars. Good stuff fam

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