awesome lyrics. but maybe try re recording with a better microphone. lots of feedback. otherwise it was great. i just realeased my track life is a journey. i have spent months and 100s of hours recording it. please take the time to value my hardwork and give it a quick listen. i would really appreciate any feedback too. thankyou in advance
good shit bro.. great lyrics...the biggest tips I could give here would be to show more emotion ... say it like it's comin from the heart and people love that man... one thing that also helped me alot was being told to look up Shakespeares sonnet #18...
if you see the patterns he uses for rhyming it can improve alot...
all in all though you got the flow down and everything just more emotion
👍👍📶📶🔥🔥
R.R.N.®
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keep it up my dude you gone get better and better one love homie
good looks fam💯 stay tuned and keep doin you
good looks fam from the heart
and good shit your fire to bro keep.up that work down there @DUBP™BuddyB💯
good looking out all yall amd i wish i had a better mic i used my phone mic to record all my shit which fuckimg sucks @KipWalls
true shit relate keep it going 💯 got yah ✌✌
bro u on some real shit
awesome lyrics. but maybe try re recording with a better microphone. lots of feedback. otherwise it was great. i just realeased my track life is a journey. i have spent months and 100s of hours recording it. please take the time to value my hardwork and give it a quick listen. i would really appreciate any feedback too. thankyou in advance
good lookin out mane follow im only gonna get better💯
that's what's up man speaking about life always hits hard
good lookin out💯
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Word feeling this
good looks fam thanks for the support you guys
I Love truth salute
free your mind homie
thanks will do @RhymesRanger
good lookimg out i will deff be taking your advice keep up that fire nice battle to
good shit bro.. great lyrics...the biggest tips I could give here would be to show more emotion ... say it like it's comin from the heart and people love that man... one thing that also helped me alot was being told to look up Shakespeares sonnet #18... if you see the patterns he uses for rhyming it can improve alot... all in all though you got the flow down and everything just more emotion 👍👍📶📶🔥🔥 R.R.N.®