What to Accept When Expecting
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Let me hear some constructive criticism fam! There's an angel on the way in my life. Big ups to my wife. Hit me up with a like. #AcceptwhenExpect
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Let me hear some constructive criticism fam! There's an angel on the way in my life. Big ups to my wife. Hit me up with a like. #AcceptwhenExpect
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@tobiahtillman s0up fac3
@tobiahtillman lol
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@tobiahtillman nice
@tobiahtillman I'm all about helping those who want it as long as u care so do i
@ThaOneYouEnvyin I'm a poet first and a bread Baker second, rap is a whole new thing for me but I'm gonna stay dedicated. Glad I have role models like you and @En47
@tobiahtillman if u don't take offense my ear is always open
take heed I what i said then.. take this down revise find a singer (i can help wit that jus hmu about it) work on ur delivery add some ad libs I'm telling u it's only gonna help
@ThaOneYouEnvyin I really appreciate the feed back. Thanks for keeping it real, no offense taken.
True man. It needs some work. I am for sure new to the rap game @ThaOneYouEnvyin
you could've found a singer for that hook and rising the beat is critical ur, like i said , a lil "offset" no offense jus constructive criticism
bro u gotta work on ur delivery you gotta keep that flow consistent ur very shallow as if ur not confident in ur own lyrics fuck that and the haters this coulda came out better rt
Thanks for all the support man.
call me a fan of the creator. super deep lines
@outlaw..goodman Thanks for the love fam.
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10
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nice bars.