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#RIEW

I'm Cruseing soon/the way day looms/feels like I'm tripping like shrooms/ talkin high off the fumes/when you walk in the room /just from this fire that I spit/dragon breath from a pit I live legit call me Donald j. just for today Tommaro's not a promise so pay homage respect the one above I'm fly like a dove all White alright just the hand I was delt what you want me to do become self woke partake in coo I'm a guyI feel bad for the giraffe at the zoo/ now back to this antifa pretending to actavest and the Allie black lives matter looks like the visigoths looking like the purge and bird box out ur window THE REST IS FREE STYLE

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7 years ago

I'm Cruseing soon/the way day looms/feels like I'm tripping like shrooms/ talkin high off the fumes/when you walk in the room /just from this fire that I spit/dragon breath from a pit I live legit call me Donald j. just for today Tommaro's not a promise so pay homage respect the one above I'm fly like a dove all White alright just the hand I was delt what you want me to do become self woke partake in coo I'm a guyI feel bad for the giraffe at the zoo/ now back to this antifa pretending to actavest and the Allie black lives matter looks like the visigoths looking like the purge and bird box out ur window THE REST IS FREE STYLE

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7 years ago

digging this bro!!.. solid flow!!

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7 years ago

@Different_Breed new battle up lmk what u think

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7 years ago

@TheRealTrapChef thank u

7 years ago

I like this vibe

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7 years ago

@Different_Breed yeah thank you

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7 years ago

parts were going in others you stumbled on, when you stumble you have to start over ND re record before posting

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nice going fam all great

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7 years ago

Legit work. You got something here. Keep working hard

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7 years ago

yeah my grammar ducks ok dope so my rhythm has gotten better now my next weakness this GUNNA help I meet my producer after X mas God willing

Immense potential though+

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just the hand I was dealt. That whole bar arrangement fell flat. Overall you write very well. Delivery needs improvement, for it to be dominate.

Tripping like shrooms, grammatically should say tripping, like I'm on shrooms, or tripping on shrooms.

@jdr88 I'll listen again and point a few out.

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7 years ago

@TyrellGibson what areas would you say.... the end I got u

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Nice content. If you can tighten up in some areas, you will shine brighter. Plus, the stutter at the end.

7 years ago

yo check me out and this pretty good

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🤓

7 years ago

hmm

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sick 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔭🎙

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