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lul swiper. me and all my niggas hittin licks.(hittin licks) me and all my niggas from da bricks.(from da bricks) whole squad full of lunatics.(we go crazy) choppa snap a nigga like a twig.(FA FA FAA) if we pull up on em then he hit.(then he hit) bullets sticken to em like sum ticks.(like a tick) but when we done he cant fixed.(no comin back) dead ona scene we neva miss.(FA FA FAA) like a orange fanta ima pop.(ima pop) yeah he standin tall we chop his top.(chop his top) choppa take his picture get em croped.(now he gone) shoot em in his hip make em hop.(oh my god) you niggas like polo yall cap alot. (yall be cappin) extended clip bullets i got alot.(i be packin) done alot of shit but aint get caught (neva) boi you gettin smoked just like sum pot. (send you to heaven) i been doin me fuck all the opps. (nigga fuck em) if i get pulled over girl these pills you betta tuck em. if you shoot at me im not duckin. but if dont hit my 40 dumpin (FA FA FAA) feel like ima make it maybe one day. till then its hot pocjets koolaid. not in college but i prolly roomate. dont trip ona block make sure yo shoe laced. you can have my fame i want the bandz. i love getting high. but hate when i land. say they gone smoke mebut here i stand. i got niggas thats gone shoot they on command. you talk alot. but you still aint shot shit. you got shot at and aint been block since. lord forgive me for all of my sins. its hard when you takin more Ls then you take wins im just tryna get it how i live it. dreamin of money how ima spend it dreamin of me and my niggas rich until then we lettin choppas rip. (Fa Fa Fa)

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7 years ago

lul swiper. me and all my niggas hittin licks.(hittin licks) me and all my niggas from da bricks.(from da bricks) whole squad full of lunatics.(we go crazy) choppa snap a nigga like a twig.(FA FA FAA) if we pull up on em then he hit.(then he hit) bullets sticken to em like sum ticks.(like a tick) but when we done he cant fixed.(no comin back) dead ona scene we neva miss.(FA FA FAA) like a orange fanta ima pop.(ima pop) yeah he standin tall we chop his top.(chop his top) choppa take his picture get em croped.(now he gone) shoot em in his hip make em hop.(oh my god) you niggas like polo yall cap alot. (yall be cappin) extended clip bullets i got alot.(i be packin) done alot of shit but aint get caught (neva) boi you gettin smoked just like sum pot. (send you to heaven) i been doin me fuck all the opps. (nigga fuck em) if i get pulled over girl these pills you betta tuck em. if you shoot at me im not duckin. but if dont hit my 40 dumpin (FA FA FAA) feel like ima make it maybe one day. till then its hot pocjets koolaid. not in college but i prolly roomate. dont trip ona block make sure yo shoe laced. you can have my fame i want the bandz. i love getting high. but hate when i land. say they gone smoke mebut here i stand. i got niggas thats gone shoot they on command. you talk alot. but you still aint shot shit. you got shot at and aint been block since. lord forgive me for all of my sins. its hard when you takin more Ls then you take wins im just tryna get it how i live it. dreamin of money how ima spend it dreamin of me and my niggas rich until then we lettin choppas rip. (Fa Fa Fa)

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This is lit bro๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ peep my pinned track too brother

you getting it fam ๐Ÿ’ฏ salute

7 years ago

this gold ho.ie.. U needa download bandlab tho

7 years ago

you good get a better mic that's all I got

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7 years ago

@KarloUncutJones ๐Ÿ’ฏ๐Ÿ’ช๐Ÿ˜ค

7 years ago

Dis a club banger dis needs to be on da radio no lie ๐Ÿ’ฏ๐Ÿ’ฏ๐Ÿ’ฏ๐Ÿ’ฏ

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7 years ago

@jodyroundhouse lol ๐Ÿ’ฏ

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@lulswiper got to strike when the inspiration hits ๐Ÿ˜‚ thank you for those beat names, you chose well ๐Ÿ”ฅ

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7 years ago

@jodyroundhouse shit im just tryna make dope songs bro. i got work in the morning yet im recording songs at 2 am in the morning lmfao

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7 years ago

nah i used this app. ill send the beat name let me look real quick

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@lulswiper wow you weren't kidding about a new drop, it is 2 minutes old ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ’ฏ๐Ÿ”ฅ want to be interviewed?

@lulswiper yeah man this is a great track keep these coming and promote in public chat ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ’ฏ๐Ÿ”ฅ

@lulswiper you are hitting the drops very well, and again the vocal overlays and transitions are really good, do you remember the name of this beat?

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7 years ago

@jodyroundhouse ๐Ÿ’ฏ thanks bro i appreciate it. i just posted another one go peep it for me. i know you gone fuck wit it.

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@lulswiper I like your flow a lot, I would like to hear a bit more energy in your voice as the song progresses though, at points you sound tired ๐Ÿ˜‚ I do that too sometimes ๐Ÿ˜œ

@lulswiper did you use bandlab to make this? I really like the effects you used on the intro, great vocal transitions, cool rhymes, ad libs are on point and again the effects are great ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ’ฏ๐Ÿ”ฅ

@lulswiper do you wear that sweater in public? I have to know, listening now ๐Ÿ‘‚

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7 years ago

@DONT_TAG_ME_AGAIN_112 thanks bro ๐Ÿ’ฏ๐Ÿ’ชmuch appreciated

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