Yo @leelan!
Waddup - let's take a look at 'music industry'!
The lyrics are fire, nicely done! Pretty effortless flow too, it sounds great, you just fell off beat a few times though!
The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow.
Good choice of beat! Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there.
It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
Can someone tap me into this game that's being played so I can turn into the vampire I've always wanted to be, going straight for the beats jugular like Dracula with no time for lacking... If I'm caught slacking I'll be sent packing for a backpack journey to where the roads don't meet with nothing on my feet in outstanding heat, my blood has over boiled and my cup has runith over, I'll keep getting better at this as I get older someone should have told me it would be like this when I was sober, I've got a girl I love to hold closer as my heart and days become colder, I'll keep doing this until my life span is over.
I think I'd know how to keep any flow on a go, I want to take my boo and a crew to taipai to travel in a elevator that moves at the speed 60 km/h in the interim just note that my girl knows I know how to elevate her and never will I ever be a traitor.
I took the time to wait for my ball shine to come to me, but I've been in the dark and now is the time to hit it out of the park, yeah you can call it a home run to where It feels as if I should be, the music industry.
This is sincerely yours
Leelan.
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Yo @leelan! Waddup - let's take a look at 'music industry'! The lyrics are fire, nicely done! Pretty effortless flow too, it sounds great, you just fell off beat a few times though! The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. Good choice of beat! Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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Can someone tap me into this game that's being played so I can turn into the vampire I've always wanted to be, going straight for the beats jugular like Dracula with no time for lacking... If I'm caught slacking I'll be sent packing for a backpack journey to where the roads don't meet with nothing on my feet in outstanding heat, my blood has over boiled and my cup has runith over, I'll keep getting better at this as I get older someone should have told me it would be like this when I was sober, I've got a girl I love to hold closer as my heart and days become colder, I'll keep doing this until my life span is over. I think I'd know how to keep any flow on a go, I want to take my boo and a crew to taipai to travel in a elevator that moves at the speed 60 km/h in the interim just note that my girl knows I know how to elevate her and never will I ever be a traitor. I took the time to wait for my ball shine to come to me, but I've been in the dark and now is the time to hit it out of the park, yeah you can call it a home run to where It feels as if I should be, the music industry. This is sincerely yours Leelan.
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