live to die

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live to die / kill ya self to live / Do by any means to handle ya biz 6 times / since I was a kid had to find my own way / find my own path / find my own belief / wat my purpose of life or wat gonna be my legacy when I not around no father figure / mom never home / brothers sister doing they own thing lived they own life / the st was my dad / but the work was my family / chocie my own fate / weather life or death or grinding on the block / working a nine to five to make ends meet so my family won't go without / cause u no how it go ain't nobody gonna do for u like u / alot of people say they real but we no the truth / live to die / kill ya self to live do by any means to handle ya biz / I always pyp / need nobody to show me how to move threw these st and paper chase / never under pressure g / sky be the limit just got to believe in urself /give respect when respect is do put the time and effort and u'll see the results / never get denied always spit fire / always being a rapper for hire / motivation be the haters and no believers / no battery in my back nobody no wat I'm doing rite or wrong cause I live my own life/ travel in my own shoe / live get respect off my own name in the hood

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jace arnold (jda/shorty)

4 years ago

dam you are really good like a pro Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

Hi there @jseries845, Here's some feedback on your track 'live to die', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 "no father figure, mom never home, brothers sister doing they own thing lived they own life" this was a really moving track, and the lyrics clearly came straight from your heart. Good rhyming here, keep it up! ✨ We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story. 👍 Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. 🙏 This time you just missed out on Featuring 🌟, but here's what you can do to make it next time: - Work on the Audio quality, right now it can be detracting from your bars! ✨ - Be yourself! True authenticity can really make people fall in love with your music! ‍🔥 - The best rappers take advice on board to improve! Make sure you engage with the Rap Fame community to help you shine bright! 💯 Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. 🤟 We can't wait to hear your next fire track! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Bo Jangles

4 years ago

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Viewboi Shine

4 years ago

Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Dope 🔥

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4 years ago

Looks like Florida Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

TMBeatZ

4 years ago

consistency on point 💯 voice suits this Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥