demo part deux

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demo part deux

Your insults are weak, Whilst my insults are full of venomous bile. I'll stick to quoting Shakespeare you qoute some Jeremy Kyle.  "A rose by any other name would smell as sweet" But at the end of the day you're like a blind man trying to cross the street. Look both ways and still have doubts about traffic coming towards. But I guarantee if you were hit there'd be applause. I'll cause you some upset nightmares and night terrors. You're daydreaming son if you think you can compare us. We're totally different. Like a Sunday drive and grand prix. I'll kick you in the head and stomach like chun li. The type of pain that remains with you past the event. Sunday morning prayers by your bedside put yourself in a deep repent. Making claims about the ability to freestyle proud of emitting bravado. Truth is you're sat on a bus writing weak rhymes with biro. Not a clue about verbs nouns and wordplay. Weekends or a weekday. I'm ready for attacks of any kind of nature. You'd love if I validated you by calling you a hater. Weekend hard man touchscreen tough guy. Dead body done in and left in a layby. I'm just joking I'm not violent or in this to fight. I'm trying to live a day dream in the day light. Combining words to make rhymes. Form up, roll out like I'm optimus Prime.

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7 years ago

Your insults are weak, Whilst my insults are full of venomous bile. I'll stick to quoting Shakespeare you qoute some Jeremy Kyle.  "A rose by any other name would smell as sweet" But at the end of the day you're like a blind man trying to cross the street. Look both ways and still have doubts about traffic coming towards. But I guarantee if you were hit there'd be applause. I'll cause you some upset nightmares and night terrors. You're daydreaming son if you think you can compare us. We're totally different. Like a Sunday drive and grand prix. I'll kick you in the head and stomach like chun li. The type of pain that remains with you past the event. Sunday morning prayers by your bedside put yourself in a deep repent. Making claims about the ability to freestyle proud of emitting bravado. Truth is you're sat on a bus writing weak rhymes with biro. Not a clue about verbs nouns and wordplay. Weekends or a weekday. I'm ready for attacks of any kind of nature. You'd love if I validated you by calling you a hater. Weekend hard man touchscreen tough guy. Dead body done in and left in a layby. I'm just joking I'm not violent or in this to fight. I'm trying to live a day dream in the day light. Combining words to make rhymes. Form up, roll out like I'm optimus Prime.

7 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10

7 years ago

nice check me out when you get a chance Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10

7 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10

7 years ago

vote my battle please

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7 years ago

@3mpath3 thanks for the feedback. I appreciate it.

7 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 7/10 Impression: 8/10

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