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#onetake4oldtimesake

#onetakeforoldtimesake yo, the doctors said I'd never walk again, i broke my neck and I'd never talk again, but that all changed as soon as I bought a pen, turned my life into a message of gems, to anyone with a mind that could comprehend, see if they time a couple minutes to lend, and if they really are my friends cuz if so they'll support me until end, cause I got knowledge and wisdom to anyone smart enough to listen, my life was once in a great position but then throughout my mission, I ended up falling victim to the people who think 700 a month is enough to continue living, before I even signed my lease I was already getting an eviction, so I was offered section 8 instead of castles and kingdoms, and they wonder why there's so many people residing in prison, then have to believe in a higher power so they turn into Christian's, But that was just one of the things that crooked politicians invisioned, another way to make money off these folks that have been poverty stricken, barely even living, and they gotta make times even harder, every day it seems like your goals are getting even farther, and if you ask for a loan or the slightest bit of help, you become a lazy piece of shit who ain't capable of taking care of themself, pawning all of your belongings for next nothing everything u own is on a shelf, except for your soul and a pathetic life that ain't even heart felt, but I'm sure once you get to hell everything else will just melt, turning normal people into gladiators with the promises of a title belt, sleeping with different women and living an eternity of wealth, but that's before you even realize you ain't even in control of your self, your just intriguing to a weakling that couldn't amount to being, you as a human being so you start believing every word that there speaking, because you get amazed by the material things you begin seeing, after briefly meeting and they make it sound easy it's almost like you cheating, all you gotta do is sign the dotted line on a contract but your not realizing that after that you set yourself up for combat, you at war with yourself and its gonna go way beyond that,

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7 years ago

#onetakeforoldtimesake yo, the doctors said I'd never walk again, i broke my neck and I'd never talk again, but that all changed as soon as I bought a pen, turned my life into a message of gems, to anyone with a mind that could comprehend, see if they time a couple minutes to lend, and if they really are my friends cuz if so they'll support me until end, cause I got knowledge and wisdom to anyone smart enough to listen, my life was once in a great position but then throughout my mission, I ended up falling victim to the people who think 700 a month is enough to continue living, before I even signed my lease I was already getting an eviction, so I was offered section 8 instead of castles and kingdoms, and they wonder why there's so many people residing in prison, then have to believe in a higher power so they turn into Christian's, But that was just one of the things that crooked politicians invisioned, another way to make money off these folks that have been poverty stricken, barely even living, and they gotta make times even harder, every day it seems like your goals are getting even farther, and if you ask for a loan or the slightest bit of help, you become a lazy piece of shit who ain't capable of taking care of themself, pawning all of your belongings for next nothing everything u own is on a shelf, except for your soul and a pathetic life that ain't even heart felt, but I'm sure once you get to hell everything else will just melt, turning normal people into gladiators with the promises of a title belt, sleeping with different women and living an eternity of wealth, but that's before you even realize you ain't even in control of your self, your just intriguing to a weakling that couldn't amount to being, you as a human being so you start believing every word that there speaking, because you get amazed by the material things you begin seeing, after briefly meeting and they make it sound easy it's almost like you cheating, all you gotta do is sign the dotted line on a contract but your not realizing that after that you set yourself up for combat, you at war with yourself and its gonna go way beyond that,

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6 years ago

tight battle on page

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6 years ago

you good that's why you strict I love em strict emcees

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6 years ago

yo peep me back please

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7 years ago

ALOT OF REAL SHIT IN HERE DAMN

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7 years ago

this is really nice "tightening belts" 💉 peep #LoveHer

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Deep and touching Great work💥💥💥

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dope good shit boss

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u did this one take? 🔥 love your storytelling, intense 🤪 great flow, 'tightenin your belts' I feel that 💥👊 overall this funky 🔥💯🔥

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7 years ago

@rapfamenews yea u know if it's not unique then it's not original

7 years ago

I'll send it when you least expect it. haha frfr... I got a CPL rite now I'm waiting on to drop...and got my new track out.

7 years ago

far from whack. unique and with a message... nice

stay strong 💪💪💯 y'all are 💯💯

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7 years ago

@BlancoDiabloR hit me up to find out about open mics, showcases, radio show info, live shows, studio time, graphic art design (CD covers and flyers), record label info etc etc.. boom bap hiphop only..

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7 years ago

from Orlando also

7 years ago

The hip hop flow shit

Impressed you kept a constant fire flow beginning to end of the song, good shit!

this was dope hip hop 101

This real deep shit! 💯💯💯💪😁👌

to ill rite here. this here faved my score 999

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