I am laying down writing thoughts which caught my attention being at this spot. Theres a lot of thing going in my mind, passing my days thinking the things I am doing are right. I am bit trapped in this life cycle in spite of knowing I can do better than many elites.
Sleeping with dreams so big, I don't know whether I am the one who God picked for things that I dream in my sleep, God tell me please, if I am the one who is gonna reap the benefit, if I will fall off or climb the peak. Whether my feet should move in other field. Or the dreams I see are just for someone else to steal. Tell me what's the deal. Will the real become my dream reel. Just answer these queries.
I always try to give my best, ready to sacrifice all the rest, knowing still a lot of potential left, never gonna lose the strength to get things what I want to have, climbing over every obstacle in the path, learning from every mistake I have done in the past, with all the courage I can grasp, here moving forward step by step never wondering how much distance is left.
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lots of potential, spit something now..express ur l!fe true
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10
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Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10
Here are my scores: Bars: 7/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10
nice track. check me out Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10
@johnbyrd.1 thank you :)
@oldschool1967 appreciate it bro. Will drop it soon. :)
waiting for your next track✌
@lokywyzr thanks bro! Will surely try to improve as much as I can.
you good af tho already
just keep grinding dude.
@iammazzyboy thanks bro!
And in which areas I should improve.
Hey guys this is my first track, any suggestions are welcome. I want to know your opinion about this track.
I am laying down writing thoughts which caught my attention being at this spot. Theres a lot of thing going in my mind, passing my days thinking the things I am doing are right. I am bit trapped in this life cycle in spite of knowing I can do better than many elites. Sleeping with dreams so big, I don't know whether I am the one who God picked for things that I dream in my sleep, God tell me please, if I am the one who is gonna reap the benefit, if I will fall off or climb the peak. Whether my feet should move in other field. Or the dreams I see are just for someone else to steal. Tell me what's the deal. Will the real become my dream reel. Just answer these queries. I always try to give my best, ready to sacrifice all the rest, knowing still a lot of potential left, never gonna lose the strength to get things what I want to have, climbing over every obstacle in the path, learning from every mistake I have done in the past, with all the courage I can grasp, here moving forward step by step never wondering how much distance is left.
DOPE 🍀