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Relax

I collapse I want you back but thee act is like a rollaspe and I ask why is my task is for me but I need to relax ill see Becuase I am more than sham I write this with the intent to vent and invent my on way to flow and go beyond the ya and eys and fuck the ways they rap sap out of your time they rhyme like like it's crime to be different the difference is this sentence had meaning like the sentence that my father took take harder look maybe your realize your eyes are thing that wrong not this song but im kid and shit show you shows the way to flow in a different glow a different shade I can aid you before you fade I evade the mainstream I made this daydream because as i stab at your will change I hit artery and gag realizing I'm just strange I feel stranined and beytrayed but no one cares about my father issues no need for tissues but I do miss you and wish you came back but aim that at the lack of good rap now a days but I'm in haze as I glance at a the chance of something above mediocre but there all a disappoinment like me I collapse I want you back but thee act is like a rollaspe But I ask why is my task is for me but relax I'll see but I define that as a rhyme that has more time to grasp the rasp of the voice that's the choice most rappers take but ache to be more not just another but a other who would love her like she is my mother be the guy that you see to be a flee but we'll be more than thee can dream to be but this in it's self is hypocrisy and honestly I should end it and not defend shit but within it is a glance of the chance of something more or bore and lay bout and out your self from the rest your not the best you must confess or you'll stress and not have time to work on the art from and trans form it into something more than norm but I've been I'm sledam ever since beldam took my eyes a line from coraline I'm not fine but for asking as your basking in your light as sulk in the dark and i will not conform becyase the shame is not worth the fame and aim for the top say but pain is not worth chop okay? I collapse I want you back but thee act is like a rollaspe But I ask why is my task is for me but relax I'll see I collapse I want you back but thee act is like a rollaspe But I ask why is my task is for me but relax I'll see

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7 years ago

I collapse I want you back but thee act is like a rollaspe and I ask why is my task is for me but I need to relax ill see Becuase I am more than sham I write this with the intent to vent and invent my on way to flow and go beyond the ya and eys and fuck the ways they rap sap out of your time they rhyme like like it's crime to be different the difference is this sentence had meaning like the sentence that my father took take harder look maybe your realize your eyes are thing that wrong not this song but im kid and shit show you shows the way to flow in a different glow a different shade I can aid you before you fade I evade the mainstream I made this daydream because as i stab at your will change I hit artery and gag realizing I'm just strange I feel stranined and beytrayed but no one cares about my father issues no need for tissues but I do miss you and wish you came back but aim that at the lack of good rap now a days but I'm in haze as I glance at a the chance of something above mediocre but there all a disappoinment like me I collapse I want you back but thee act is like a rollaspe But I ask why is my task is for me but relax I'll see but I define that as a rhyme that has more time to grasp the rasp of the voice that's the choice most rappers take but ache to be more not just another but a other who would love her like she is my mother be the guy that you see to be a flee but we'll be more than thee can dream to be but this in it's self is hypocrisy and honestly I should end it and not defend shit but within it is a glance of the chance of something more or bore and lay bout and out your self from the rest your not the best you must confess or you'll stress and not have time to work on the art from and trans form it into something more than norm but I've been I'm sledam ever since beldam took my eyes a line from coraline I'm not fine but for asking as your basking in your light as sulk in the dark and i will not conform becyase the shame is not worth the fame and aim for the top say but pain is not worth chop okay? I collapse I want you back but thee act is like a rollaspe But I ask why is my task is for me but relax I'll see I collapse I want you back but thee act is like a rollaspe But I ask why is my task is for me but relax I'll see

7 years ago

yeah just put some Flav in that mother f*****

Author
7 years ago

@slimehouse Thanks for feedback 👌

7 years ago

you got to put more rhythm in it sound like reading a letter but you got lyrics

7 years ago

No problem bro. You got this. You know you do.

Author
7 years ago

@P.O.A Thanks for honest ears it means a lot to heat that

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7 years ago

no doubt you can always work on flow but you got the lyrics bro. That was in the feels. Not many can do that. You got this with more practice you can execute and kill bro.

from the heart is always good 💯

Author
7 years ago

@P.O.A Thanks I feel as if my flow and needs a lot of work but I got lyrics down

1
7 years ago

Bro this is deep. Still listening but this is deep bro. Needs some work but still think its great.

Author
7 years ago

@Muphdiver thanks for the honest ears and I'll keep that in mind

7 years ago

@xtoxicxx but you could make this way more captivating if you were on beat and did a rap structure

7 years ago

@xtoxicxx I realize these lyrics are deep

7 years ago

@xtoxicxx you realize you can pinn this

7 years ago

honest ear for 👂

Author
7 years ago

hah what your fucked

7 years ago

haha your dads dead

go peep end of the episode bro

7 years ago

come listen to my music and give me your feedback

Author
7 years ago

@4ever.aP thanks

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