Delivery needs some work, need to work on syllable count on your bars as well. You're trying to fit too much into a line, hence it's throwing off your rap cadence. Rhyme scheming like a roller coaster, meaning do well, than, stray away. Staying on topic pretty well. Neeeeed to find a rap voice...very monotone..makes it hard to listen through an entire song without losing interest.
Overall: 6/10
Bars: 7/10
Delivery: 7/10
Impression: 5/10
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@JKthetormentedJOKER
Will do ma man ®️
@Apex3393 You'll learn fast with that attitude G. DM me if you ever need an honest ear. 💯💯💪
@JKthetormentedJOKER
I appreciate everything on your feedback bro 👌
Delivery needs some work, need to work on syllable count on your bars as well. You're trying to fit too much into a line, hence it's throwing off your rap cadence. Rhyme scheming like a roller coaster, meaning do well, than, stray away. Staying on topic pretty well. Neeeeed to find a rap voice...very monotone..makes it hard to listen through an entire song without losing interest. Overall: 6/10 Bars: 7/10 Delivery: 7/10 Impression: 5/10
cheers bro amateur shit no booth nothing il have better songs out asap bro
Here are my scores: Bars: 7/10 Delivery: 6/10 Impression: 8/10
brill bro murder arts uk all dayyy
appreciate it bro
I felt it Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10