Jad Isidore

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 7/10 Delivery: 6/10 Impression: 7/10

I Cr3a8

5 years ago

try simple word play to get your flow and beat pattern down. Also try rhyme sceme abab or aabb. Count the syllables in each line and make sure they are equal. With time and practice you can turn those great words into great songs. keep pushing keep writing and fuck all haters

Poverty

5 years ago

this is for the fool ... the imbecile ... the ignorant ... i speak to you frankly ... you are living your life in such a way that i cann t even describe how backwards it is ... you call them by a name that isn t relevant to their ancestorial name ... your mind must be the size of a pea because it is so self centered on you that your soul must be a nuclei ... you drop swear words like you are from the eighties ... you give thought a bad name by speaking before you think ... i wonder where your thoughts come from ... you don t give any consideration to what you sound like when you speak ... true your words might cut like a knife but your words are hurtful and harmful ... they are at a level that is beneath the earth and come from hell ... your words are hateful and that is where hate is from ... hate doesn t come from above ... i have never been taught to hate ... i have been told to either accept them as a person or be like Jesus and love them ... I don t know where your education started with using these imbecile words ... but just so you know they need to stop ... and as far as whomever taught you they are a ignorant fool ...