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Aint really had 'Troubles' with 'The Trident' but despite this, 'The Police' want to 'Lock Us' saying we the root of all the 'Violence'/ #SilentSouljaHitSquad #TRU #GB #UK #BmViedo #BmBest #2018Fire #DaveFlow #Lyrical #UKallDay #SPITMAFIAFFS #Economicdestruction #SM #SoundCloud #BetterBeFeatured #iamsparkz #TwistedReality
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Pretty good. Nice work to overcome your challenges.
I mean, I appreciate it, this has took 3 months and just short of a k of not being able to spit because of the emotion, dont let my accent get in the way :) @Mohassan Appreciate it all the same, will try to improve π―
Bars 8 Delivery 3 Impression 7 make me feel it put ur heart 300 percent behind ur bars. they're deep I like ur bars.
I appreciate that but, @Magicfire. why only a 6/10? Where abouts can I improve? I've got triples, I've got schemes, wordplay, what am I missing?
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 9/10
Feeling this bro. Battle me.
@DuncanHill much respect π― @Godd I never waste smarts, proof is in the pudding ;)
be intelligent my guy. Wasting smarts is a bad idea Bars: 7/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 9/10
Much Respect no impediment now bro. Realism βΎβΎπππππ€π€ Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 8/10
@JujitsuJo I appreciate it π―ππ»
"EVERYTHING I rap about is FACTS"!πππ― @sparkz_
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Lyrics, not edited for post: I've become a development of myself, used to have a speech impediment now I ring a silly-bell/ Which is a detriment in itself, I'm scared to be intelligent because it simply doesnt sell/ Feel like I'm forever cresting this hill, I've been getting bread but never actually eating a meal/ Trapped tryna cut a 5-0 deal, must be the Olympics and obviously theres implications with the bill/ I'm mentally frustrated, I know what I could be capable of if I showed all the if the rage I've got/ Stored up inside me until I go crazy and lose my train of thought I dont want to derail this cart/ I'm a monster, never been any kind of figure, I'm a witness to my half pint vigor/ Not holding a spade I've been driving a digger and over time this hole you find me in has only grown bigger/ Ugh/ All I see is petty guys, tryna speak petty lies, how do sleep at night, ain't ever do no right/ Looking into their eyes, ain't a conscience in sight, dont pity their plight, you got something you like they the first to start a fight/ I've been six six six since 03, it's been 9 since the first time that I bought my first 8 in/ Since then I've handed sanctions to pagans, you some slippery man, I fucking hate snakes fam/ I wasnt 'Born' amung 'Kings' so my 'Rise To The Top' has been 'Surprising', I 'Kept Fighting', had to 'Put All My Might In'/ Aint really had 'Troubles' with 'The Trident' but despite this, 'The Police' want to 'Lock Us' saying we the root of all the 'Violence'/ They want to 'Talk To Us' but 'Refuse To Parley', treat us like 'Nails In Hay' because 'My Opinion' is 'Different To What They Say'/ You wont 'Catch Me' 'Running' with this 'Craze', I've been 'Driven Away', I refuse to be 'Kidnapped' by a society burning 'At Pace'/ Forever voyaging lost rivers with a long forgotten vision, staying hidden to the best of my given/ Ability to find shadows and hide in 'em, that's how I define my wisdom, I'll never lay victim to this victicious system/ I'm highly surprised I'm not in prison, probably because I'm not worth the time for them to listen/ Nobody finds what I have written, but you can still find me fighting the same mission/ I cant find what is missing, if I'm the bad guy, why arent I the one dissing? Why do I have to be the one fighting off writtens?/ You hate me for a reason, you cant see how shes misleading, I tried to help you, you used to preach it/ Now you cant concede it, like a cut you left my bleeding, "only friends on the internet", but doesnt time have any meaning?/ Dont any of my lines have any meaning? You tell me that I'm defeating but behind my back your happy to tell man you dong like how I'm scheming?/ You went from friend to adversary over a girl, youd make out you was worse than me but now you claim you will kill?/ I'm chapter heavy while you want to aim at the world, I do not lack perspective, I told you from the start that dame would make you ill/ Join me as I pop a pill and crack a beer, cop a leg and chill no need to act in fear, I gotta stay on top of my drill, I'm trapping tears/ I want to drop a mil but I dont see fortune near, I'm coughing, Ill, I feel as this habit sears its past rational to cheer/ I'm smoking grass til I damn near pass this faction dance, I didnt do no acting class, everything I rap about is facts/ Everything I rap about it facts, my music is the only thing I have left to grasp, onto, certain man want to see me fail, others want to see me jailed/ I cant let that kind of evil prevail, I've got way more left in me to tell, Sparkz til the death of me, i guess I'll see you all in hell./
Aint really had 'Troubles' with 'The Trident' but despite this, 'The Police' want to 'Lock Us' saying we the root of all the 'Violence'/ #SilentSouljaHitSquad #TRU #GB #UK #BmViedo #BmBest #2018Fire #DaveFlow #Lyrical #UKallDay #SPITMAFIAFFS #Economicdestruction #SM #SoundCloud #BetterBeFeatured #iamsparkz
Real shit π₯πͺπ½π
nice! Bars: 6/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 7/10