Awoken

Garrett Parsons

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8 years ago

Getting better ? #Vote #Like #Follow #Comment #HelpMeOut #DGR #Hype #Lit

Killa Kays

8 years ago

this is alot better.

Garrett Parsons

Author

8 years ago

@Vestdeonpollar I know you said I sound like I’m reading from a script and that’s what I mean

Vestige

8 years ago

@GarrettParsons I didnt say that.

Garrett Parsons

Author

8 years ago

@Vestdeonpollar my other ones are a lil bit better

Garrett Parsons

Author

8 years ago

@Vestdeonpollar thanks man I know I sound wack but I’m still trying

Vestige

8 years ago

you have to pause between your lines in order for better flow an understanfing....an it sound like your just reading a script, your not even on beat. .....you need allot of work kid ...keep working on it tho

Garrett Parsons

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8 years ago

@100shooter ty man 🔥

ROOKIE OF THE YEAR✅👀

8 years ago

Dope bro a lil more work and you will be a beast in the future

Garrett Parsons

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8 years ago

@dgryan215 DGR🔥🔥✊🏻

DGR YAN

8 years ago

@GarrettParsons dgr28🔥🔥💪🏾💪🏾💣💣🎤🎤

Garrett Parsons

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8 years ago

@TLss I will ty

T'LS(•Rebel•Nation•)

8 years ago

@GarrettParsons keep up the good work homie💯

Garrett Parsons

Author

8 years ago

@TLss ty means a lot :) , I know I have to work on my delivery but I’m working on it

T'LS(•Rebel•Nation•)

8 years ago

You lyrics are decent you just need to work on your delivery. sounds like you don't feel your own track. I you can't feel it no one will.