random- fucked up at the end lol

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Stop by take a break be catch your breath and calm it down you I'm getting wild with these vocals getting loud so why you wanna try me when it's time to draw the crowds knowing I'm the kind and they gonna love my sound Rollin does the street and you know we going hard smokin on these shards while I'm getting on these bars. Staying on my guard they know I'm in charge and here pretty soon I'm number one on the charts you know my beats are fresh and you know my words are clever so let Bbqme keep going cuz I now my shit is better. Crowned bread winner the special guest at dinner. I always lightin up so you call me shimmer

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Jeremy Davis

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8 years ago

Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

Hey @JeremyDavis8292, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'random- fucked up at the end lol', here are our thoughts 💥 Make sure you put headphones in on your next track as the feedback is affecting the recording quality! There's some nice lyricism in here, good stuff. Some seriously impressive rhyming in here, you know what you're doing for sure. We appreciate the idea behind this track, nicely done. 👍 Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! 🎶 This beat is working well for you! 🎼 Why not try using some of our in-app effects, such as auto-tune or equalizer, to take your track to the next level? Definitely need to add headphones and this will be a hundred times more replayable! Thanks for submitting music for us to listen to, we can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Lil Ziggy en

4 years ago

Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Mellid

4 years ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Jeremy Davis

Author

8 years ago

don't get close to me cuz you Makin me look dimmer so get back in the kitchen and keep working on my dinner

Leavem petrified

2 months ago