@TeddyBone5150 thanks mate, we've both gave it our best shots, and it overall was a good project and fair enough with the bars and pronunciations, as long as people like it and it helps people understand people with depression then thats the main point
yo, I like what you're doing with this and the message your putting out with it. but just a little tip something I struggle with sometimes also. clear pronunciation some of it sounds mumbled. but the majority of this song is legit it has sincere emotion in your vocals and good word usage and your on time with the beat and have a real message to it overall good job.
Bars: 6/10
Delivery: 7/10
Impression: 10/10
look I know that we don't know each other but I'm here to tell you that suicide is never the answer whatever you going through trust me it will pass things do get better in time. I see that you're very lyrically talented so just focus on your dreams and this might sound corny but pray seriously it helps. I don't know exactly what you're going through right now but if you ever need someone to talk to I'm here. like I said I know I don't know you but your song really touched me.
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@TeddyBone5150 thanks mate, we've both gave it our best shots, and it overall was a good project and fair enough with the bars and pronunciations, as long as people like it and it helps people understand people with depression then thats the main point
yo, I like what you're doing with this and the message your putting out with it. but just a little tip something I struggle with sometimes also. clear pronunciation some of it sounds mumbled. but the majority of this song is legit it has sincere emotion in your vocals and good word usage and your on time with the beat and have a real message to it overall good job. Bars: 6/10 Delivery: 7/10 Impression: 10/10
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 7/10 Impression: 7/10
look I know that we don't know each other but I'm here to tell you that suicide is never the answer whatever you going through trust me it will pass things do get better in time. I see that you're very lyrically talented so just focus on your dreams and this might sound corny but pray seriously it helps. I don't know exactly what you're going through right now but if you ever need someone to talk to I'm here. like I said I know I don't know you but your song really touched me.
BLESSED 🙏
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