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my first "real rap" so yep
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Damn lil homie u got writing skills for sure !!
there's potential.i like the meaningful bars. put emphasis in your voice so it dont sound like reading. I just learned thatπͺ
speak louder maybe more aggression too. you did very well. keep it up. you'll see your progression on here if you stay long enough
Nice I like it keep at it respect π
Better than how i was my first rap but speak up a bit rap with pride you know?
Salute
DOPE
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my first "real rap" so yep
Damn lil homie u got writing skills for sure !!
there's potential.i like the meaningful bars. put emphasis in your voice so it dont sound like reading. I just learned thatπͺ
speak louder maybe more aggression too. you did very well. keep it up. you'll see your progression on here if you stay long enough
Nice I like it keep at it respect π
Better than how i was my first rap but speak up a bit rap with pride you know?
Salute
DOPE