🎈 The Game of Life 🎈

0:00
0:00
🎈 The Game of Life 🎈

my first "real rap" so yep

8 Comments

Leave a comment

Author
8 years ago

my first "real rap" so yep

8 years ago

Damn lil homie u got writing skills for sure !!

8 years ago

there's potential.i like the meaningful bars. put emphasis in your voice so it dont sound like reading. I just learned thatπŸ’ͺ

speak louder maybe more aggression too. you did very well. keep it up. you'll see your progression on here if you stay long enough

Nice I like it keep at it respect 😎

8 years ago

Better than how i was my first rap but speak up a bit rap with pride you know?

Salute

User avatar
789
Total plays
160
Followers
119
Following

You may also like