you got it hat off for the confidence and structurally it's sound.
Like I can rhyme just not to a beat have no confidence spitting.
I know more I practice better it'll be.
sorry bud but the song made no sense. your rhyming every bar with whatever goes when u cld switch it so the song can flow easier.
It's like you've went.
until i rise to the top.
I won't ever stop
then this Mic I will drop
when my heart goes pop.
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@axaviers Thanks for the criticism. Means a lot.
Here are my scores: Bars: 7/10 Delivery: 7/10 Impression: 7/10
that's pretty good man👍
bruh ok keep at it ....😏
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Morning and thanks.
you got it hat off for the confidence and structurally it's sound. Like I can rhyme just not to a beat have no confidence spitting. I know more I practice better it'll be.
sorry bud but the song made no sense. your rhyming every bar with whatever goes when u cld switch it so the song can flow easier. It's like you've went. until i rise to the top. I won't ever stop then this Mic I will drop when my heart goes pop.
Thanks bro
Thanks
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good morning
ur just monotone...put some kind of emotion in there...it sounds lifeless...bring it to life