...another day in paradise

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...another day in paradise

just a quick freestyle off the dome as usual... bored at the crib, would love some constructive criticism from anyone bcus I do this shit for fun but am always down to hear any tips to tighten up my flows... #peace #love & #ganjababe

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8 years ago

See track description โ†‘

Bro itโ€™s been years !

Author
8 years ago

Thanks home boy โœŒ๏ธโœŒ๏ธโœŒ๏ธ

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Author
8 years ago

๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ thank you bro really is encouraging I do appreciate ya for reals

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Author
8 years ago

see I'm glad I asked ๐Ÿ˜Ž that's actually something that I could easily work on for the future tracks...! thanks for taking the time man seriously

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also switching the flow is too and trash at both atm

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but it's very important

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yes I do uve listened to my freestyles I'm working on that to its hard af

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Author
8 years ago

Yea that would've been the perfect spot to do that I get what you're saying

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u got potential for sure tho

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Author
8 years ago

yea That's legit advice no doubt..I almost feel like I could do so much better if I sat down to like write one and then I could know which parts bring out more emotions but when I don't even know what I'm about to say it's just kinda harder then lol, ya kno?

right there act like ur mad feel the anger when u say it

like when u said I make sure the hits land

lower beat volume just a tad would help for this track as well always wanna check with and without headphones make sure u dont drown urself out

feel what your saying and put emotion into it

the best thing I can tell you is when you rap

๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘ŠโœŠ๐Ÿ˜Ž

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