hey man you going well for a youngin. deadset you got a huge advantage starting so young.
got some flow and shit going on in this.
what is letting you down though is you sound like you don't believe in yourself. if you don't believe your bars the listeners wont believe them either. spit em like you mean em bro.
i started rapping about 15 years too late in my life but you got nothing but time to put in work and make shit happen.
hmu whenever and i will try help out where i can
This is nice. I dig the beat and where you’re going with your cadence. The only honest feedback I would say is practice your emphasis on words like expression and delivery. Plus practice timing like trying to keep your bars between the snare hits. I’m not sure how long you’ve been rapping, but this is wayyyyy better than me when I started. Lol
good but increase vocals and stay on beat bars are there but you missed the chance to make this track 💯🔥it's good for real keep it up and work on flow you have potential.
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you have an interesting appeal. keep up the good work.
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hey man you going well for a youngin. deadset you got a huge advantage starting so young. got some flow and shit going on in this. what is letting you down though is you sound like you don't believe in yourself. if you don't believe your bars the listeners wont believe them either. spit em like you mean em bro. i started rapping about 15 years too late in my life but you got nothing but time to put in work and make shit happen. hmu whenever and i will try help out where i can
Good message keep working on yo flow 💯
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keep rockin it 🙏🙏
Ok Sweetdreams keep it up this is Dope💯🔥💣💨.
This is nice. I dig the beat and where you’re going with your cadence. The only honest feedback I would say is practice your emphasis on words like expression and delivery. Plus practice timing like trying to keep your bars between the snare hits. I’m not sure how long you’ve been rapping, but this is wayyyyy better than me when I started. Lol
This smooth right here
good but increase vocals and stay on beat bars are there but you missed the chance to make this track 💯🔥it's good for real keep it up and work on flow you have potential.
🛰🛰🛰🛰🛰shit homie keep it up... u got mad potential...
dope track u went in on it kiddo 💯🔥
nice tone to set for the beat... It sounds a little freestylish but some lil off tempo but definitely worth a long verse 💯 Keep pushing them out😉
Nice Keepin coming
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the lyrics are nice, salute
I think it's off beat but I can dig it
on some real i didnt like it and thats cuz im a music man u off beat no good lyrics hit that practice room just my thoughts nothin againt you