The biggest issue is the vocal-to-beat balance. The instrumental is so much louder than your voice that I had to really focus just to hear the lyrics, and even good lines can get lost that way. Your timing and natural flow are solid, but with an instrumental this lively, I’d like to hear you interact with it more instead of staying in the same pocket throughout. The lyrics are decent, but some of the punchlines feel generic, so push the writing further and give the listener more memorable lines. The singing is also noticeably off key and goes on too long. If you want to keep those melodic moments, use them more strategically—maybe a line or two—unless you work more on pitch control. That could make it feel intentional instead of becoming distracting.
Top strengths:
Rhythm, Flow
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The biggest issue is the vocal-to-beat balance. The instrumental is so much louder than your voice that I had to really focus just to hear the lyrics, and even good lines can get lost that way. Your timing and natural flow are solid, but with an instrumental this lively, I’d like to hear you interact with it more instead of staying in the same pocket throughout. The lyrics are decent, but some of the punchlines feel generic, so push the writing further and give the listener more memorable lines. The singing is also noticeably off key and goes on too long. If you want to keep those melodic moments, use them more strategically—maybe a line or two—unless you work more on pitch control. That could make it feel intentional instead of becoming distracting. Top strengths: Rhythm, Flow
Your energy is high. Wordplay menacing. On and off beat flow still pocket. Beat tough. Were you freestyling??? Top strengths: Production, Vibe, Voice
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