outside

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aww shit he back again they un finally let nigga out the pin homeboys didn't send a nigga shit a couple ladies checked on me now and then but its cool im straight in they mouth im fina leave a bad taste kick ha out once i giva bitch a facial I wish I would take a hoe on anne date free jim locked down in the feds he coming home in 2038 since i got boxed i done gained lil weight i look around and see alot of people fakin itaq thats the reason I be staying out the way prison taught me how to put that bread back and save tellin on people thats just sum i can't relate real niggas dying off at a rapid rate

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Lemar Dunn

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15 days ago

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FynestStoryTella

5 days ago

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O.D.O. Wanny

15 days ago

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Rap Fame A&R

15 days ago

Hey @lemardunn, We appreciate you sharing 'outside' with us! 💥 1. Practise makes perfect, improving on every drop will only take you closer to sounding like a pro. 😎 2. Try and test out the distance between you and the mic before recording, this can make a huge difference to the quality! ✨ 3. Using a headset will hugely improve the recording quality here, consider giving it a try! 🎧 4. Try mixing up different light studio effects on your vocals to give your track the perfect sound every time. 🎤 5. Use denoise on your vocal to reduce the background noise on your track! 6. This was a nice taste, but we're gonna need a longer track if you want us to give you detailed feedback! 7. Why not upload or record a video to go along with your music, that way you could get featured on the Popular Video section! 📸 Keep perfecting your sound, we'd love to hear you progress on your musical journey! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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