im here to tell you sorry for the way i been treating you/hoping πŸ˜” you believe me/ one day dont up and leave me

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im here to tell you sorry for the way i been treating you/hoping πŸ˜” you believe me/ one day dont up and leave me

im here to tell you sorry for the way i been treating you/hoping πŸ˜” you believe me/ one day dont up and leave me/ here stick out i love the way u feed me/ when your love got greedy/you stop chosing me by choice/ every time i hear your voice/ (verse) everyday new a fight, trying to prove my point/how im with my girl but it feel like i need a gun/words are stronger then a sword theses days/train full Caucasians they never go past cermak china town/ they know not to come to the hood/ im been looking fa my girl,have you seen her/

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15 days ago

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15 days ago

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