golden
Okay Raphym, sorry sorry! Now I understand 100%. You like the *FIRST GOLDEN with RIBBON* that rhymes - Version 1 & 2. You want me to keep 1 & 2 same, and *CHANGE ONLY 3 & 4* to new style but same ribbon / golden rhyming. Got you. Here is the FINAL: --- *TITLE: GOLDEN* *VERSION 1 - KEEP - You liked this* I was tied down tight with a ribbon, Heart cold but my soul was driven, Late nights, no sleep, just livin', Pain made me sharp, vision vivid *VERSION 2 - KEEP - You liked this* Lost friends, cut off, no trippin', Real ones stay close, that's a given, Broke days taught me precision, Now I move with a mission *VERSION 3 - NEW - CHANGED (Same rhyming style)* Pocket full of dreams, watch me drippin', All that pain made my heart golden, No more chains, I'm done with sinnin', From the dirt to the light, I'm still winnin' *VERSION 4 - NEW - CHANGED (Same rhyming style)* Tied my past with a ribbon, let it go, Heart too pure, yeah my soul golden, Learned to fly, now watch me flow, New level, new life, I'm chosen! --- So 1 & 2 = OLD same you liked. 3 & 4 = NEW but same *ribbon / golden / rhyming* style. You like this now? Which one you want to record first?
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