Your voice is deep and dope man!
I think I heard an accent too! Super cool!
I felt like it was hard to make out what you were saying! Maybe try pronouncing more intentionally or simplify the syllables for a test run? It might the style your going for too so go ahead and disregard what I’m saying if that’s the case! I feel like if you also take pauses in between lines and then proceed with the next might be worth trying and see how you like the way the delivery is on that! Great job though manFIRE 🔥
Keep grinding ✊
Strong Bars 💪
Hey @tonygoulter,
Thanks for taking the time and letting us give you some tips on 'Rare Breed '! 💥
1. Make sure your mix is A1 Saucin' before uploading to Rap Fame! We'd love to see the best you've got! 🙌
2. The best rappers take advice on board to improve! Make sure you engage with the Rap Fame community to help you shine bright! 🌟
3. There's a $1,000 prize pool in our weekly contests 🏆 Think you got what it takes? Try creating a track based on this week's theme!
We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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Your voice is deep and dope man! I think I heard an accent too! Super cool! I felt like it was hard to make out what you were saying! Maybe try pronouncing more intentionally or simplify the syllables for a test run? It might the style your going for too so go ahead and disregard what I’m saying if that’s the case! I feel like if you also take pauses in between lines and then proceed with the next might be worth trying and see how you like the way the delivery is on that! Great job though manFIRE 🔥 Keep grinding ✊ Strong Bars 💪
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Keep dropping bars like this, you're on fire! 🔥🎤 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉
Hey @tonygoulter, Thanks for taking the time and letting us give you some tips on 'Rare Breed '! 💥 1. Make sure your mix is A1 Saucin' before uploading to Rap Fame! We'd love to see the best you've got! 🙌 2. The best rappers take advice on board to improve! Make sure you engage with the Rap Fame community to help you shine bright! 🌟 3. There's a $1,000 prize pool in our weekly contests 🏆 Think you got what it takes? Try creating a track based on this week's theme! We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
No one does it like you, slatt, certified and solid! ✅