Ok the opening vibe sounds amazing
The verse could be better after the hook fades
It sounds like your autotune is out of tune
I would dial the knob back some its giving too much of that robotic delivery
Unless that's what your going for
I would practice your timing on when your verse starts
Try to end your rhymes on the snare
Or a little after for your deliveries to more effective
Top strengths:
Hook, Instrumental, Chorus
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Ok the opening vibe sounds amazing The verse could be better after the hook fades It sounds like your autotune is out of tune I would dial the knob back some its giving too much of that robotic delivery Unless that's what your going for I would practice your timing on when your verse starts Try to end your rhymes on the snare Or a little after for your deliveries to more effective Top strengths: Hook, Instrumental, Chorus
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