نفس آخر

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نفس آخر

نفس آخر صبح که میشه / میگم ای کاش نمیشدم من / تو این مسیر هر چی رفتم / تهش هیچی بی‌خبر شدم / اسیر و سیر آرزوهام / پرپر شدن مثل برگا / تو خزون هر چی ساختم / با امید شد یه خاطره / بی‌نشون خسته‌ام از / این دویدن به کی بگم / این همه درد توی شبای / تاریک و سرد کی میاد و / میگیره دست می‌گن فردا / بهتر میشه اما فردا / نمیاد دیگه این چرخه رو / دیگه بسه دلم میخواد / برم از اینجا اما می‌دونم / آخرش باز همینه و / ولش کن…

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2 days ago

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2 days ago

Hey @yasinmasumi, We're gonna drop some tips for your track 'نفس آخر'. Let's get it! 1. Spend some time on your vocal levels - it's important to find a balance between the beat and your bars! 2. Be yourself! True authenticity can really make people fall in love with your music! ❤️‍🔥 3. We have a bunch of options to really add to your track, try using some effects on your vocals next time! 4. Defo try out our denoise feature to minimize any background noise on your track! 🤫 5. This was too short to give you any proper feedback, can you drop something a bit longer? 6. Why not upload or record a video to go along with your music, that way you could get featured on the Popular Video section! 📸 It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame team 😎

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